So now that I had a plot structure I had to strengthen and deepen the it. As I wanted to represent certain motifs in my video, violence, drugs, suicide and bullying, I needed to think of how these motifs could be placed into my plotline.

My ideas were as follows:

VIOLENCE – Father represents to violent figure in the video, inflicts violence upon girl. However girl shows another side of violence as she inflicts it upon herself (self harms).

DRUGS – The use of drugs will only briefly be shown through the use of a syringe, girl will use drugs due to her suffering caused at the hands of her father.

SUICIDE – Shall be shown at end of video briefly, girl will take her own life.

BULLYING – Shown as the father bullies his daughter. Bullying shown in a family/home environment.